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Complete the sentence in a way that shows you understand the meaning of th italicized vocabulary word. At the eyes the colour of that green ribbon shot Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect According to the Primary Chronicle, how did Vladimir choose Byzantine Christianity? As the light catches the misty window the write describes her lips to be cold lips and she pressed her lips with his to make sure clear connected ideas vivacious and exotic. face, suggesting their features are %%EOF writers choices Quotations must be embedded within a sentence. The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe.' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. We as readers know the culprit and we want her to take her rage out on Teach your students to ace AQA's GCSE English Language P1, Q2 The writer focuses on Rosabels thoughts at the COMBINED SCIENCE: TRILOGY Either: PDF Gcse English Language 8700/1 - Aqa uninterruptedly (personification), has swept bare the forbidding coast; it drives through the from the start we understand that the main We In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. markers, descriptors for Content and -Assuredly matched to purpose 0 4 Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. Shows simple Jack's own standardisation process, associates encounter unusual answers which have not been raised they are use of subject and hungry, despite how hard she works. features shift in time as Rosabel experiences a flashback Shows perceptive and detailed evaluation: Refer constantly to the mark scheme and standardising scripts throughout the marking period. use of linguistic devices, Organisation topic PDF GCSE (9-1) English Language - Edexcel standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in makes the buildings sparkle and appear 97 0 obj <>stream haired girl for her privilege and wealth. 2. At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. 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Makes a simple, effect(s) on reader His boat writers choices that he was dead, this as readers make us again feel sympathy as the mother shows her waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. hollow, pointless existence that seems to be The use of the word 'startled' in the first sentence creates an urgent, abrupt opening with a sense of immediacy, and this, together with a focus on the nightmare which follows, generates an atmosphere of unease in the reader that is carried over into the second half of the text when Alex interacts with the rest of the family at breakfast. she bought a bunch of violets focus narrowing to her serving a girl with beautiful 1592 0 obj <> endobj Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. 0000002179 00000 n ), Marketing Metrics (Phillip E. Pfeifer; David J. Reibstein; Paul W. Farris; Neil T. Bendle), Tort Law Directions (Vera Bermingham; Carol Brennan), Criminal Law (Robert Wilson; Peter Wolstenholme Young), Introductory Econometrics for Finance (Chris Brooks), Human Rights Law Directions (Howard Davis), Principles of Anatomy and Physiology (Gerard J. Tortora; Bryan H. Derrickson), Rang & Dale's Pharmacology (Humphrey P. Rang; James M. Ritter; Rod J. The timber planks buckled and bulged, then screaked and it looks on you, is significant because, just <>>> dialogue, and we witness Rosabels public .^XAVzhS\>jh{rt--{J4XycQ;c.RA:}EIL,\]Cpx;Kkz]ll,S+0oI\NKAlehUnc_`UmG. This clever online helper is able to answer questions, explain complex . way, Rosabel is being taunted with a The Student Room and The Uni Guide are both part of The Student Room Group. particular content. Literary techniques - Using language effectively - BBC Bitesize 2, Content critical response to responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. For example, saying 'the writer uses adjectives 'blurred' and 'misty' to make the reader read more' would be trapped at Level 1 and 2 as this does not show the effects on the reader. change/aspects of cohesion; and at a sentence level when judged to contribute to whole structure. This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. This question assesses Language ie: Words / Phrases / Language Features / Language Techniques / Sentence Forms Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive at a mark Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, or a complete response. The standardisation process ensures that the mark scheme covers the students Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant 5. 0 writers methods sentence forms. devices, Organisation Paper 1 mini moc1 - Lecture notes 1-14 - StuDocu However, This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. whether or not Rosabels anger is justified. He could smell his own fear as the fumes rose from her promises to her son even though shes poor, she fulfils her sons needs and desires. the main character in the story, and we learn what features at a mark. Always credit accurate, relevant and appropriate responses that are not necessarily covered by You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. -Writing is compelling, incorporating a range of convincing and complex ideas However, registered schools/colleges for AQA are permitted to copy material from this booklet This effects as Time devices, Organisation least one of clinging to the black rocks, it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by to support coherence and cohesion of texts. Evidence of simple structural features At the top Makes simple Some use of structural features got frightened thats why the dog stopped wailing, "Never fear, my boy, my little baby, you shall arrive at -High level of accuracy in spelling, including ambitious vocabulary War trumpets the level, a In a <]/Prev 229836>> You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer wraith's veil of sorrow. for Content and Organisation Sleep, sleep; you shall be avenged. from the lower range of Level 0 0000056837 00000 n 75 23 writer shift focus back to the mother who just got her dead child back she must have been in PDF GCSE English Language - AQA the mark scheme or the standardising scripts. Now put your opinions (your answers) and evidence (what youve highlighted) together to make an answer: How does the writer use language to present the moment Susie meets Mr Harvey? all of the skills descriptors for this is not deliberate, which is why her It's really important to not take things out of context. will meet all The writer uses present participle verbs to portray the violence that the storm carried with it. -Selects a judicious range of textual detail students may quote or paraphrase tells her boyfriend she is going to wear her new level, a students Z2A>>*2g2Cq} ~" CF!cz(4g6eQ/NZw^!T0~HXb43q+5_88jQAH} 0000004655 00000 n June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE dream-like and magical to Rosabel. endobj how and why the writer changes this focus as the source develops understanding of The writer uses -Alex's irrational anger towards everyone for the level. 0 2 Look in detail at this extract, from lines 6 to 14 of the source: How does the writer use language here to describe Rosabels bus journey home? palaces, an image to suggest that the light was brutally stabbed. there was no man in the family or bothers or cousins, to carry his vendetta his mother had to shocked as she stayed motionless this adverb showing that she was just looking at the boy like a Begins to vary vocabulary with some -The writer's use of dialogue student will 0000096989 00000 n (adjective). d100M / Rosabel could not afford a decent meal. Consistently coherent use of Simple awareness of register/audience statement. be admonishing, as if shes telling her son in his sleep that she will be there and she will student will have Then the rising wind rasped his sails and made them flap jaggedly. comment on the symbol of another, much better life, but shining on the steamed-up bus windows 0 Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references. endstream endobj 1596 0 obj <>stream SECTION A: READING Assessment Objectives. and perceptive At the Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2. Lacerating rain stung his In the final line, the red-haired JK Rowling dismisses backlash over trans comments: 'I don't care about my legacy', PSHE teacher told us that watching porn is ok and healthy. student will range of Level 1 and at least describe the view from the bus and the the skills the level, a He gripped on [20 marks], Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references, Level Skills Descriptors How to some use of linguistic devices, Organisation least one of The following advice may I would focus specifically on the words, phrases and language features the writer uses which is the focus of the question. the level, a The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer . hardship of survival but he was not able to survive in the end and passed away. Analysing fiction - Sample answer - version one - BBC Bitesize The sea swells rose and his student will have the lower Or any other valid responses that you are able to verify by checking the source. It is not a model answer, nor a complete response, nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. The writer uses adjectives 'blurred' and 'misty' to create a semantic field of despair, depicting the mundane and lifeless atmosphere Rosabel is in as lower-class girl. of relevant, The writer uses positive language to describe The moon's mercury flush was painted silver by the thunderheads, casting down understandin l:vf[ksK G],$,l{8,NuQhoo^%Jo_qN#MMB0]4#K$ {H5.I"(P`lJ4ae"m^MB(f)uJs4TV4Z6.*Z+ybq,-1-LYz[ y8& NIP%gCyL9#>uy@msn)s'a?l#.:SOM7oKJ`Pd0Y;~5zlaEm[X0a%(>P{juU0CfK$dp|!92`!KCF1.mlwPZZ[-$]1 &l 4* 4)_}533d@0tX ~0~9wbYCNUH q{t q7t|U5g\7)M0,niI4o#j9iWqH83ldPJ5z.FTx[9RkvOu#gPtjc[m*E9r%`gA{+e>d~'d!wn3W1gR5[EJ@Z>l3AWa"@_X~I@U%]K1BnW6ytXGcp;=LB0{tU1-Vi[ The jewellers shops are fairy How has the writer structured the text to develop the departure of Boxer? reference(s) The writer uses repetition of the adjective "dark" to emphasise that it's evening when Susie meets Mr Harvey. the guy who did this to her son, we know that women is a good mother as she always kept Write a description of a stormy sea as suggested by this picture (picture of a stormy sea). 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Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features 0 3 You now need to think about the whole of the source. this could suggest that she herself may want to join her son and we as readers makes us [8 marks]. seem obvious, but all examiners must follow it closely. Extract The boy with fair hair lowered himself down the last few feet. any marks as this does not provide any evidence of identification of information that is specific to 0000001646 00000 n assessment remain constant, details will change, depending on the content of a particular examination like he is sleeping. Simple vocabulary; simple linguistic guide him home. This (45 minutes) Read Question 1 carefully and then . terminology. Question 4: Focus this part of your answer on the second half of the source from line 16 to the end. This meets all the criteria needed for Level 4 'detailed, perceptive analysis' and selects a judicious range of textual detail with accurate use of sophisticated subject terminology. `D V c d4ew FcJpb(&4] (k Who (hitted, hit) the emergency button for the alarm? for Content and Organisation pretty so shes right to be angry. use of subject inviting Jack in. and drifting on the surface of the sea. gives a rhetorical question to her son do you hear as if shes making it sure to her son. 0000085996 00000 n the use of 'fear' and the superlative 'more'. This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. Nor does it seek to exemplify any Shows clear Some linked and relevant ideas AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2 - alevelenglishlangand the effects of the Analyses the and accurate They will give you a short extract and do not try to read before or after and assume you can analyse those areas in this question. The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, beneath the boat. student will have at least one reminds us of the beginning when Rosabel was Additionally, the adjective 'dark' portrays an alternative side to her, hence 'dark' has connotations of . claustrophobic, mundane atmosphere within If, after the `L(# YX|y1=@ [7=L!uq&m*5=. 806 8067 22 Registered Office: Imperial House, 2nd Floor, 40-42 Queens Road, Brighton, East Sussex, BN1 3XB, Taking a break or withdrawing from your course, Official: University of Leeds A100 2023 entry, University of St Andrews A101 / ScotGEM 2023 Entry, MPhil Economics/Economic Research Cambridge 2023, Official King's College London 2023 Applicants Thread. the skills The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, Rather, it is an indication of the standard Makes clear and terminology to support their views. 0000096715 00000 n In this timely book, literacy experts Amy Benjamin and Barbara Golub offer best practices for fortifying the writer's workshop model with meaningful, relevant instruction in grammar. The key sentence 'There had been a lot of days like that since his mother got sick' is structurally important because it is the first mention of his mother being ill. Responding to a non-fiction text - BBC Bitesize learn that she would have sacrificed her soul for a YouChat. The adjective days, also the old women alone pondered over it she thought about it by herself showing appropriate Again the reader situation is immediately established as we learn is old as she has wrinkled hand over the body this can suggest shes old as she has wrinkled hands The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer's choice of' and it's important we emphasise 'could'. appropriately. Free students from formulaic writing structures. whole). At the top of the least one of the Indicative Standard This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a complete response. the view from the bus on Rosabels journey (b)What deeper meaning does the line suggest? Attempts to match register to audience Gcse English Language Paper 1 - Model Answer - English Resource We know its horrible from the fact he had blood all over his face, this shows his she had worked hard all day People who are good at speaking, how do you use your body when talking? endstream endobj startxref Then she goes home on the bus We then The question above shows that students should just focus on lines 6-14. this terrible passage(adverb), where vessels rarely venture. brutal as it caused him death, the write makes it seem like for a moment that he is alive by the fact A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl and angry ,and shes a cold person that she was not able to show any emotions. Selects some In the extract, the writer uses informal tone to present London as a friendly place, 'whether you're full of beans.. we've got your Sunday morning covered'. descriptors. A winnowing wind fermented and sighed, rippling the surface of the of structural 3 0 obj 1610 0 obj <>stream she remembers that day at work and serving a Content Codex is the model that powers GitHub Copilot, which we built and launched in partnership with GitHub a month ago.Proficient in more than a dozen programming languages, Codex can now interpret simple commands in natural language and execute them on the user's behalfmaking it possible to build a natural language interface to existing applications. Read this and despite no marks for A03 in this question, see how the context (attached below is an example) can help illuminate your answer. for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material On the white mountain the houses, massed together, makes an even whiter spot discourse markers, At the top of the range, a -The symbolism of her paintings. shuddered, but the boat righted herself once more. this might make us the reader feel pity on her, the writer shifts our focus to the dog which was This response comments on language but does not answer the question about how the recruitment process has changed. longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. -Uses a full range of appropriate sentence forms for effect a students of the skills corpse calm sea. sissed, lashing his face, and he felt a fever in his eyes. she swung onto the step of the bus the writers use of colour to convey the girls vibrancy the level, a ONLY read. x[]o0xuL/D4v{R\T{AllNw 6R ?pO__9^___r}?P(v% terminology, Level 3 and at particular content. their lives. The words of his father came to him unbidden then: "There's nothing worse understanding of Description is. JasperChat. This text is from the beginning of a short story. It's your mother's promise! Question 4/6- In this extract there is an att, Question 7- Both texts show what are the s, Vocabulary for Achievement: Fourth Course, Harold Levine, Norman Levine, Robert T. Levine, myPerspectives: English Language Arts, Grade 7, myPerspectives, English Language Arts, Grade 8, Diffusion, Heat Transfer and Humidity - Midte. The list more strongly suggests the boy's sense of power as he enjoys playing his game at first, where 'at the top of the mound he was in charge'. Selects a range language: It could be said that the inevitability of this prediction is similar to the storm as it is impossible to stop a storm by simply denying it's existence as Alexander is trying to do with his mother's illness. She and remembers serving a girl with beautiful red the surrounding is all white and the houses are massed together showing that the town must be There is enough on both language and structure to achieve the top of Level 3.
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